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Awhile back - right after the House episode "A Simple Explanation" - I issued a challenge on [livejournal.com profile] highland_cross to write a House/Highlander crossover featuring a predictable character by the end of July. Unfortunately, I then had to move and change jobs. And I'm moving again tomorrow. So, I've written something. No promises on quality. Unbeta'd and very short. I'll have more up after the move, but right now I have a hundred things to do and about 24 hours to do them in.

So, without further ado, Lawrence the Long-Lived


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Fandom: LORD OF THE RINGS
Pairing: Finduilas/Denethor
Length: Very, very long, but easy to read in small bits
Author on LJ: http://edoraslass.livejournal.com/
Author Website: Archived at Henneth-Annun
Why this must be read:

Everything about Denethor, Boromir and Faramir changed after I read this. A beautiful look at the life of the Steward's household told by the nanny, starting from Boromir's birth and going through the end of the War of the Rings. Edoraslass knows and loves children, and that shines through in a Boromir and Faramir who could run up to you one day at the park, while simultaneously being very much the person they were in the books. As usual for Edoraslass, every character is amazing. Even the drunken lout who makes a single appearance! Denethor and Finduilas feel like people and parents, struggling with children and a kingdom in the midst of chaos and loss.

Edoraslass has more short stories in this universe, but I can't possibly list them all and the mods wouldn't like me very much if I did. So take this for what is is: an excellent world that can be fleshed out at will as you take in more of Edoraslass' stories. Go read.

Under My Wing
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Watching the elections a couple days ago. MSNBC commentators talked to Obama's campaign staff and said that he was going to bring people who were "bipartisan and new" into his power structure.  Well, take a look at the list of proposed US Treasury Secretaries in.  NONE of them could possible qualify as "new", although a few are bipartisan (interesting - even the Democratic candidate would rather have a Republican overseeing the economy). 

The best pick -- the absolutely best pick, the one pick on that list that would reassure everyone that Obama is willing to do what's best for the American people instead of what's best for his cronies -- would be Paul Volcker. He's not new, but he is reliable and trustworthy on the economy. He was Fed chair in the 80s and eminently qualified to control the Treasury.  Unfortunately, the noises coming out of the Volcker spokespeople are sounds of "it's a great honor to be considered, and of course we wouldn't turn the future president down, but...."  

Another mentioned pick is a close buddy of Obama's, Lawrence Summers at Harvard University. You may remember him from the scandal a few years back when he nearly lost his job for promoting sexism at a conference through statements about how women were inherently bad at math. Which is complete BS, as years of neuroscientific studies have shown.  Overall, no difference in math ability between the sexes.

So will it be the publicly-pilloried crony-pick, the excellent-pick, or one of the random former officials thrown in their for contrast?  We'll just have to wait and see.



Another thing to watch is Obama's White House Chief of Staff pick.  New Politics? Yeah right. Obama picked the Democratic House whip.  The man wanted someone who would make people jump when wanted them to, and that's what he got. This isn't change, people. Obama isn't change.  He's a smart guy who looks sharp in suits, knows how to manage PR and can pick people who know what they're talking about. That may make his administration better than a McCain administration would have been. But it likely won't - Obama doesn't know a lot of people in the Capitol, which makes him vulnerable to the Democratic flunkies he's surrounded himself with. And Obama's a lot more liberal than people want to think.  The flap about Bill Ayers aside, Obama's a left-wing socialist. That's not always a bad thing, but it very easily can be. And given Obama's lack of governing experience, I think it will.

Hopefully, Obama will keep himself to the charismatic diplomatic roles he's had so far, and make decisions with lots of advice. That will likely save him from drastic missteps. But I wouldn't count on it.
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http://mistful.livejournal.com/110810.html ; is something we all need to think about. In an era of digital information, where something that's been 'known' for years can be rewritten instantly and our only protection is spreading data, this is something we need to fear.

Because it happens. Check out  http://wikiscanner.virgil.gr/ ; and the scandal it started, that got hushed up by corporations. Who edits a corporation's wikipedia page most often? It's PR employees, as it turns out.  Thought wikipedia was a reliable source?  Think again...but it's the source most school kids turn to when they want to find out about something. What are we teaching to our kids?  And is it the same thing we taught them yesterday?

Or are we turning into the Soviet Union?  Because trust me - it can be done.  Speaking as a technology specialist, it is easy to erase something from the Net. It is easy to delete records and remove files and change your vote.  Teens do it for kicks. The government does it for power. We need to stop anyone from doing it. For sanity. 

You're probably going to think I'm crazy. I'm telling you, it happens. This is not a Illuminati warning.  Photo manipulation, rewriting history textbooks - the Nazis did this. Likewise, Communists in Russia and China, the fascists in Spain, Julius Caesar and his contemporaries, etc. The list is endless. And we're just fooling ourselves if we think modern society is immune.

Watch it,
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And the latest advance in criminal law is:

http://news.cnet.com/surveillance-state/

Check it out - we can't beat people up, so we hire thugs to do it for us!  Entreprenuership in the public sphere.  I have never been so ashamed of my country.    This goes beyond incompetence, stupidity, detainees and faulty intelligence reports.  How on earth could a US official authorize this?
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Why don't people like the epilogue?

The series needed to end. You couldn't honestly think there wouldn't be an epilogue. Structurally speaking and publishing-wise, an epilogue was definitely needed. I think JKr struck a nice balance between crushing any further Harry Potter publications and not crushing Harry Potter fanfiction. And if you did not expect that ending...where have you been for the past seven books? The anvil-sized hints? Everyone knew H/G and R/Hr was go back in book 5. It's an alchemical deep-magic myth-type story. The story's a pretty standard type.

The epilogue's not badly written; it's simply not as spare as the rest of the book. Which is as it should be. This is normal life now, not fighting a desperate guerilla war to defeat an evil oppressor. There should be more details, less wrenching emotion, and the fact that the scene was more reminiscent of the beginning chapters was entirely appropriate.

As for the names...Percival. Ginevra. Bilius. Arcturus. Narcissa. Five names, Dumbledore had. These are not your standard Western names.

Dumbledore's a real person now, instead of some slightly-creepy cult/mentor figure.

I think the very last line perfectly sums up Harry's view of his life. The shadow that destroyed his youth and childhood is gone. Life is good. The fact that people don't like the actual Harry's point of view isn't surprising though, given how many fics completely rearrange his personality.

Lament! For I have only gone to one Harry Potter publishing-date party, and can never do so again. Lament! An icon of the modern age is over, and I must find something new to look forward to in my life. Lament! Lament, Lament.

I loved the epilogue.

The story needed an ending. This series has been building, and building, and building. It needed closure to keep it vital and alive; to do other than write an epilogue would leave a bleeding wound draining the life out of the books into esoteric reams of fic. This is the Story that Never Ends; It Just Goes On and On, my friends.

The books ended just like they began. Harry through Harry's eyes, without really noticing what else is going on around him. After they leave the station, he'll find out what Hermione and Ginny were talking about, and who Ginny saw on the way in and what they wre doing and who said what about whom - Harry wasn't paying attention to that just then, just like his kids and the ]I]entire station[/I] was completely ignored. I've been saying it for years: Harry is an unreliable narrator. He doesn't see everything, we don't get told everything he sees, and what he thinks he sees isn't necessarily the way things really are.

I believe that Snape was loyal to the ideals of the good. He was a bitter, petty, vengeful, spiteful little man, whose final acts were to ensure that
1) Wizarding Britain would survive intact,
2) Harry's questions would all be answered, and
3) He (Snape) would get some recognition.
That suggests some pretty serious dedication to the light.

You don't kill your mentor because of a long-dead obsession. Snape's had a decade and a half to grow up since Lilly's death. There was doubtless some maturing in that time. His affection for Dumbledore (look carefully at that seen where he heals Albus up. That's love and friendship) and his desire to stop Voldemort (whom he betrayed of his own initiative; he wouldn't have done that if he actually believed what Voldemort was spouting. Snape's whole Death Eating career sounds a lot more like being abandoned by other avenues than anything else) were probably quite strong as well.

All the earlier characteristics - pride, bitterness, a need to prove himself - are there too. But in the memories Snape gave Harry, Snape's relationship with Lilly was the most important factor, because Harry needed to understand why he betrayed the Dark Lord, and why he kept on betraying him. The other characteristics that Snape displayed earlier simply weren't as important right then.

Characters are not as two-dimensional as a single situation portrays them, just as your behavior at work is not the only way you behave. The whole spectrum of experiences has to be considered.

I've been up for nearly 24 hours now, so I'm going to be so I'm coherent for D&D at 3 today.
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New entry for GAFF worthiness:

This review was written in response to Death of A Soul by roedhunt, and starts off responding to the author's comment that:

"Oh good! That's what I wanted actually. It showed (I hoped) that even beyond his obsessions and greed, he was still a man who is human. He's not evil, but has done what many would consider to be evil. In his own mind he felt he did nothing wrong - so does that make him wrong just because everyone else thinks it is?

But thats the way I look at it. *g* Thank you for reading and reviewing! It makes my day! *hugs*"

I just had to respond. So I did:

"Actually, forcing someone into marriage and raping them IS evil, not just something that "can be considered" evil. If Snape was actually not-evil and/or actually had the motive of protecting Harry (as opposed to the motive of having sex with him), Snape would not have demanded a marriage; at the very least, there would be no clauses about having sex.

The fact that Snape does not recognize the evil that he has done means that he has no conscience (also called being a sociopath).  Last I looked, sociopaths were considered evil for precisely this reason; they did not recognize the tremendous harm they were doing to other people.

I feel sorry for Snape too; the man's a sociopathic lunatic, and will probably never be able to fit into normal society.  He's doomed to a lonely and condemnation-filled life. 

But the fact that he is going to be lonely and hated does not excuse his actions or mean that he and what he did is not evil. And being evil does not mean that someone is not human.  Your logic is really, really out of whack here. You're setting things up as mutually exclusionary that really aren't; being evil and being human are almost defined as being co-existing conditions (until you get into supernatural demonic manifestations and things like that). 

The writing for this fic is ok but the plot is standard and not pulled off well. You've created a perfect non-con setup, but then back out of it by pulling sympathy for Snape, who deserves sympathy only in the way Voldemort deserves sympathy for being so obviously off his rocker.  The fic isn't coherent.  Also, the description of why people turned against Harry and the whole reasoning behind the marriage isn't very original or well-thought out.

If you went with the concept all the way, I think that would create a stronger fic.  Trying to see things from different points of view requires that a different point of view have another take on the situation; unfortunately, that's not the case here.  All sides of the story seem to point out that Snape is irrational and inhumane, Harry is tortured and no one seems to really care."

*shudder* *shudder* *shudders harder*   I've read good non-con, and I've read good non-con that turns into con.  But this is fic just can't make up its mind, and the twists and turns leave readers thinking they're on a roller-coaster that keeps changing tracks.

And before you ask, I did sign my name.  If I'm going to lambast someone's work, I'm certainly not going to be cowardly enough to do it anonymously.  Also, I'm talking about the Snape in the fic only here. 

GAFF

Feb. 10th, 2007 10:43 pm
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http://www.godawful.net/

A fic that should go there:

Harry Potter and Fate's Debt by Intromit
"Hermione was sitting straight up, but unlike usual, she did not wear a face of rapt attention, but one of announce – obviously still made about house elf treatment. Dumbledore’s next statement though caused everyone to complete attention to him." 

"“Spew?” asked a fearful wrong." I had no idea that abstract concepts took an interest in Hermione's pursuits.

"“Founding members?” Ron ejaculated his fearful expression during to abject panic." So...he got rid of his face?

"
Ron and Hermione were stunned and quickly agreed to help research ways to get passed a dragon." Well, one would stand next to someone trying to get rid of it, I would think.

And...new branches of magic! "
Severus had not taken the news that he would be teaching Harry Potter Occulumency well," quite possibly because no one has ever heard of it.

I think that says it all.  A face of announce? A fearful wrong?  This person obviously needs English lessons (some of the verb tenses suggest that English is not their first, or even second, language).  The plot changes have about the same level of coherency. 
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A very prominent LJer in the HP community said something that I find reprehensible:

"Yep. The crazy fundamentalist female-lead. A reporter asked her what she thought of gay marriage and she said "The bible says it's a sin, but it also says judge not lest ye be judged and it's up to smarter people than I am."

The journalist truncated it to "The bible says it's a sin" and published. She got all pissy that OMG, PEOPLE THINK SHE'S A BIGOT!

Hi, Harrie. You're a bigot."


Frankly, I am seeing bigotry here, and it's not the actress. Having a moral code and a religion does not make one a "crazy fundamentalist." Assuming that it does is making a judgement based on a negative stereotype; that is bigotry.

The actress is obviously refusing to make any kind of a judgement. She has stated her personal preference, and then said "I am not going to judge." That is the exact opposite of bigotry; that is the open-mindedness that liberals keep saying they want. Isn't a refusal to judge others based on our personal standards the object of all the concern over learning to accept diversity?

I have my own opinion, which might or might now be the same as Harrie's or the speakers. But I respect the right of both Harrie and the speaker to have their own, different, and perhaps mutually incompatible opinions.

Personal freedoms and basic civil rights are frequently under attack from those who loudly claim to support them the most. I really could not care less what side of the political spectrum you are on. But please, the next time you feel the urge to lambast someone for having a different opinion, stop and take a moment to think about what you are doing. If you want the freedom to express yourself, you need to grant others the same privilege.

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